Silver Pen

Okay! Sorry about the long reply, but here I am. To all, thank you for all your critiques and spell checks, I cannot believe that I did so many things ...

Thanks defend! I've written poems on and off before, but I'm not so good myself. Hopefully I can get some practice here though. Oh, and for future readers, I'm sorry ...

Thanks defend! I've written poems on and off before, but I'm not so good myself. Hopefully I can get some practice here though. Oh, and for future readers, I'm sorry ...

Thank you Rosey and Selene for commenting - every little bit helps! And I see how there are a lot of confusing and rough patches. I appreciate you both pointing ...

Absolutely beautiful. The rhythmn was amazing! I love this poem! -R